Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Te Kura o Tiori - Burnham School. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join my journey and give me some positive feedback.
Tuesday 4 March 2014
The storm
The storm blew the wind. The sky was black. It rained. The sky was whistling. The tree are falling over.
Great writing Shaye. We have had a few storms in Christchurch lately to be able to write about haven't we. Next time try using some different sentence starters to make your writing more interesting for the reading. From Miss D 5 Sentence Team Sumner School NZ
Great writing Shaye. We have had a few storms in Christchurch lately to be able to write about haven't we. Next time try using some different sentence starters to make your writing more interesting for the reading.
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5 Sentence Team
Sumner School
NZ